Good for a first time video trailer!
I like the light reflections off of the wings.
I’ll give you one pointer - when doing trailers, make your shots/scenes shorter (cut them to about 3-4 seconds in length and cut into another shots). But in order to do that, you need other shots to cut to. It helps keep the watcher’s attention. You picked a good sound track, one that would be good with some jump cuts.
@Jerdoo, on this forum has done one that uses short cuts.