FYI - Typos and suggestions, in penance for ‘reflection’ error…
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“… although is can serve as a backup …”
suggest
“… although it can serve as a backup …”
37 / 109
“… Talking to close to the microphone …”
suggest
“… Talking too close to the microphone …”
37 / 109
“… Wiskey …”
suggest
“… Whisky …” or “…Whiskey…” as preferred ಠ_ಠ
40 / 109
suggest ‘LOOK OUT FOR [traffic / runway obstruction],[clockface / compass direction],[altitude]’ in ‘Standard Phraseology’???
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“Regional-jet 347, descent to altitude 5000 ft, QNH 1020”
suggest imperative verb ‘descend’, to replace noun, (even if there is no discernment in speaking or hearing) re: direction to pilot to comply, et al.
“Descend FL80, Regional-jet 347”
…
“Regional-jet 347, descent FL80”
“Descent to altitude 5000 ft, QNH 1020, Regional-jet 347”
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“… The word “TAKE OFF” is only used when an aircraft is cleared for takeoff. At all other times, the word “DEPARTURE” is used…”
suggest explanatory example, such as ‘For example, “Holding short runway 27, ready for DEPARTURE, CALLSIGN” or “Traffic advisory, Runway 27, for DEPARTURE to the West”’ ???
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“Generally, controllers will avoid passing a clearance to a pilot engaged in complicated
taxiing manoeuvres and in NO occasion when the pilot is engaged in line-up or take off
manoeuvres.”
suggest “… on NO occasion when …” or " … in NO circumstance when …"
I’m only half-way through your excellent manual. Pls advise if you find this useful and I’ll take a look at the rest.